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Growing Up in MGTOW

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Published on 29 Jan 2024 / In Film & Animation

There is a lot to be grateful for.

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You see - I had had 3 or 4 hours sleep, woke up at 4 am - ish - had to go pick up some medical supplies from a fair distance away, and to do it before it got hot.... IF I could.

AND I have a habit of getting into endless repetition and this was an unscripted chat on the road.

It could have been really improved by using it as the template and writing up a written script, with:

1. Point by point bulletins.

2. Adding a scripted narrative to each bulletin.

3. Rehearsing it once or twice, with live recordings, and then:

i) Making additions and subtractions - with concise editing, and

4. Then going with the polished enough, final version.

Infinite repetitions is a BAD thing for spoken communication.

They MUST be worked on, and rehearsed and scripted out of existence.

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