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DREAM WOMEN | Black Pill | Grey Pill

Published on 24 Jan 2023 / In People & Blogs

Is all that's left for a men in the west the dream of a long term relationship with a Woman #men #blackpill #dating

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This is a lot better - it sounds like your working from a written and prepared script with bullet points.

A) then B) then C) etc... and only going backwards to tie in a specific subject that say B) was a lead in for F) , but not repeating the points over and over and over...

A huge improvement.

Good Job.

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